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Monday, September 1, 2014

A Lost "I"

"No happy ending.
Only compromises.
Shoved into darkness.
Naming  it Trust.
Playing the make-believe game of Love
Grabbing for Relationships-a fabled treasure trove
Finding a false security in numberless pictures
Forgettable moments camouflaged as memorable ones
Numerous contacts bored into a fake conversation

Artificial.
Superficial.
Mindless.
Nameless.
Existing only in caricatures.
Rambling about hope.
Cribbing about Change.
But at that dark moment standing friendless.
Seeing yourself behave in a way that you promised you never will.
Compromising on your character in the name of  ‘being nice’.
Family, Friendships,acquaintances, strangers
Acting with all of them
Fighting for all of them
But For you?

Are you complete?
Do you like the hypocrite you see in the mirror?
Do you like this half-baked Semi-truthful lump of flesh?
Don’t you smell the stench of falsities?
Don’t you hear the yowls for nourishment from the inner character?
Is that your hair curling in painful convulsions of cheapness?
Is that your leg limping in pitiful jerks of shriveled sureness?
Is this the end?
Are you yet another victim of the blind chastised cult called community?
Are you yet another hostage of this home of hypocrisy?
Have you turned into a noise of nosiness in a mist of mumbles?
Are you seeped-in with societal sewage in this sea of evolutionary fumbles?

Is that you laughing?
Or wickedness showing its teeth?Once again.
Is that you dancing?
Or is that the megalomaniac's ego gyrating?Once again.
Is that YOU preaching?
Or is it the incestuous WE dictating?Once again.
Do you recognize yourself?
Do you?
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Who are you?"

yelped A Lost "I".

Once Again.





4 comments:

  1. Deev, this is one your best works. Every line is so deep and a slap.

    Best Lines:
    Are you yet another victim of the blind chastised cult called community?
    Are you yet another hostage of this home of hypocrisy?
    Have you turned into a noise of nosiness in a mist of mumbles?
    Are you seeped-in with societal sewage in this sea of evolutionary fumbles?

    I am so inspired with the depth of your thinking that I tried my hand at writing and after a day, all that I could manage is this:

    Do you no longer daydream?Don't you realize, you have to Live and not just linger?
    Don't you know, Trillions were born and are already gone as a light beam?Do you still want to avoid danger?
    Do you care being deemed Mad, by this Insane scheme? Don't you believe in your own Mind any longer?
    Don't you fret sharing your little secrets with the loved ones, as they seem? Do you feel that the bonds are ever so weaker?


    Keep writing and inspiring :)

    -Satvik..

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    1. your lines? first attempt? :O
      whoa!
      "live and not just linger" what a phrase!
      I am glad that my writing has inspired you so much :)
      Truly!!!
      Thank you so much!:)

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    2. yeah, was my first go at writing :)
      I now understand how difficult it is to find rhymes and synonyms for a word :P
      Thanks!

      -Satvik..

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    3. Lol...ya it is.
      But sometimes it comes in the flow.

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